Character/Judgment thread (VVO)

Name: Chelli
Race: Fairy
Gender: Female
Height: 4'11''
Age: 201
Abilities: Manipulation of ice, and limited control over the element of water (includes conjuration). Being relatively inexperienced, she can't use her powers well. Furthermore, use of her ability will slowly drain her energy as a whole. Icicles sprout from her back whenever she feels endangered or she is using her power.
Rank: 228 ("HEY! I'm new here!")

Appearance:
Hair: Light blue
Eye Color: Sky blue
Skin: Pale-ish
Clothes:
~ Blue dress
~ White undershirt
~ Blue bow

Description: A young, fragile ice fairy recently captured by the pit handlers, just after celebrating her 201st birthday (nobody could ask for a better gift, could they?). Born from the mythical energies that surround Isiya, Chelli is gifted with the ability to handle and manipulate ice. She's not very skilled with her powers, though, and her abilities tend to desert her when she most needs them, making her an incredibly unreliable survivalist. Paired with a physically weak and tiny body that has never known abuse for hundreds of years, Chelli is poorly suited to life in the pits. Now that she is sent to fight against the most vicious and bloodthirsty of creatures, even she doubts her own survival. But even when the odds are horribly stacked against her, Chelli will fight until the very end.

History: For almost all her life, Chelli remained an unknown entity in the charmed pond of Mizusuineei, the Isiyan deity of water. She remained there for the vast majority of her existence, oblivious to the events and happens that lay beyond the mystical barriers of the pond which she was forbidden to cross. As such, she took little time to develop her abilities and skills. It was only after a random wanderer happened to catch her bathing, that she was discovered. After that, it was only a matter of time before the pit handlers captured her, deemed her worthy, and threw her into the dark world of the pits. Being a total newcomer, Chelli receives only the worst treatment and living quarters available. She has yet to fight a battle, or eat her first meal (which she hears are dreadful).

Role: Fighter (?)


THE VODALKA
Mysterious, unknown entities that watch the Ring from a distance. Almost nothing is known about these mysterious four, other than that they always shroud their bodies in a full-body cloak and always travel in a tight group of four. They are rumored to possess inhuman strength and abilities, but this has never been proven. Some even say they are not even human at all, and they may even be right.

Name: Elrich Sanque (el-rik sawn-k)
Age: 23
Race: Human
Rank: 237
Abilities: Can see the flow of mana without assistance of his eyes. His manacrafting would take about 15 seconds to make a small knife but the knife would only be solid for 5 seconds so completely worthless. 15 seconds in a fight could be the whole duration of it. Has a high body benefit. His ability to see without his eyes halves all of his benefits meaning he is a lower body benfit then Adelle. Though he is weaker than Adelle, he makes up for technique and skill. Blood has an extremely high concentration of mana so if he gets any in or close to his eyes, his ability to see mana becomes worthless. He can see darkness but blood acts like a flare or a spotlight to him, blocking his vision.

Appearance: 6'1" Not extremely muscular but still string looking
Hair: Dirty Blonde and distended
Eyes: Gold. His eyes are clouded over due to the fact he is blind in both eyes.
Clothing: Olive green tunic
Other: Scars on his chest and arms from rigorous training

History: Was born into the Sanque bloodline in a family that had a trend for giving birth to children with high body benefits. (Meaning once every three or four generations.) Elrich was the most recent one in this one branch. This branch trained their children rigorously but Elrich was born blind. He had a rare ability of his bloodline to be able to see mana without using his eyes which, unfortunately halved his benefits. Elrich was out on a personal three-day survival training when he was taken by the pit handlers. He tried to fend them off but he had brought no equipment with him and was unused to unarmed fighting.

EDIT: WOOHOO! I GOT APPPROVED!! YAY!

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Name: Akito* (Real Name: Lantou Kiere)
Nicknames: Atou, Etou, Scab
Age: 26
Race: Lycan (There IS a difference BTW between Werewolves and Lycans!)
Abilities: Besides the wolf transformation? The ability track a person's exact position based entirely on smell. (YES THAT IS IT)

Appearance: thin and reminds the viewer that he doesn't get to eat much. (Kina hard to explain how a fighter gets to eat so well, especially a condemned one.)
~~~~Hair:: Crimson, Spiked back
~~~~Eyes:: Red
~~~~Clothing:: Bloodied Rags and a scarf tied at the neck (Looks like a tie?)
~~~~Other:: Has distinct prison tattoos on his left and right arms and a long scar across the right side of his face.
Rank: 327
History: Discovered in an abandoned house south of the arena by a local venison merchant, Lantou was raised as a wolf, however, months later, the merchant was surprised to see that the wolf had been replaced by a toddler. Over the next decade, Lantou shifted back and forth between the human form and his wolf form. It wasn't until the merchant came home and cut himself did Akito discover his true potential. It was by his hand that he slayed his own foster father. As he reverted once again, instead of immense guilt and depression, he sank into a state of near insanity. By sunrise, there was nothing left of the town. Because of his brashness, blatant disregard for human customs, and control, he was chased out of tens of towns and villages. Realizing that if this continued, he would no longer be able to feed, he transpired to have a more gentlemanly approach to people and towns. He slicked back and cut his hair, and changed his clothes every now and then. This charade was successful until he had stumbled into the wrong household. Once again, he was shunned out of the town, and because of his mistake, word had soon gotten around about "The Gentleman Beast" He was caught 3 months later and forced into the ring. This was not the end of his story however. In fact, Akito enjoyed the fights he was given. He had also made a deal with one of the guards to let him feast on a live combatant during his fights. For this he would give the guard amnesty if he ever had to break out. But that would never happen....

Role: Fighter

Other info: I may make him loveably cynical if this gets accepted.


*Adopted this name to fit in with the bred fighters. He had changed his name to this because as he was being brought to the Pit, He saw a small mound with the name Akito written on a rotting stick. Once he found out that bred fighters had only one name, he took it upon himself to burrow as deep as he could into this gory heaven.

-Edit-
Whoops misread the rules! Sorry!

Cram wrote:

Name: Atoki
Nicknames: Atou, Etou, Scab
Age: 23
Race: Lycan (There IS a difference BTW between Werewolves and Lycans!)
Abilities: Besides the wolf transformation? The ability track a person's exact position based entirely on smell.

Appearance: Buff, but not entirely hulking, a tad bulky though.
~~~~Hair:: Crimson, Spiked back
~~~~Eyes:: R: Red L:Green
~~~~Clothing:: Bloodied Rags
~~~~Other:: Has distinct prison tatoos on his left and right arms and a long scar across his face.
Rank: 12
History: Discovered in an abandoned house south of the arena by a local venison merchant, Atoki was raised as a wolf, however, months later, the marchant was surprised to see that the wolf had been replaced by a toddler. Over the next decade, Atoki shifed back and forth between the human form and his wolf form. It wasn't until the maerchant came home and cut himself did Atoki discover his true potential. It was by his own hand that he slayed his own foster father. As he reverted once again, instead of immense guilt and depression, he sank into a state of near insanity. As he was cornered byt the town guards, he let out a fierce roar, and by sunrise, there was nothing left of the town. He has been wandering ever since and has killed countless people. Now he finds himself, finally at home where his king can kill and destroy without fear of being pursued. It is here that he wishes to stay and fill his endless bloodlust.

Other info: In case you haven't noticed, this guy is HAPPY about killing.


So is THIS good enough?

Sorry, no.

First: Nobody under rank 20. EVER.

Second: No orphan status unless they are a bred fighter.

That's it. VVO would like to have a word with you.

eheh
sorry! I was tired and cranky. 20 pages of Kumon are to blame
how a bout i just edit it to your specification
Just a few "stupid" questions
What is the LOWEST rank?
Where will the fights be held?
What makes a bred fighter not have parents?
How could Atoki have parents if he 1)killed his foster parents and 2) kills people for sheer fun?
How do people get sent/forced/picked to fight?

Cram wrote:

eheh
sorry! I was tired and cranky. 20 pages of Kumon are to blame
how a bout i just edit it to your specification
Just a few "stupid" questions
What is the LOWEST rank?
Where will the fights be held?
What makes a bred fighter not have parents?
How could Atoki have parents if he 1)killed his foster parents and 2) kills people for sheer fun?
How do people get sent/forced/picked to fight?

well, didn't expect you to get it on your first post

normally just putting the rank somewhere below 220 should be safe (since your character is new, even if you put down something like 75 you'd be pushing it, it can still be a killing machine however)

the fights are held in multiple arenas or rings, in a remote area in Isiya where many can be kidnapped and trapped in this fighting system, details are still being added on by VVO

I'm skipping the parents questions, VVO will answer that later (or someone else)

and they are litterally hurled into the arena, some go willingly, don't pick a fight and someone will pick one with you sort of world, that's the force, and if they can take out whatever is forcing them, that counts good enough as a fight, there's no other way, since none of these characters can just teleport out of nowhere (characters such as Res are bystanders, not actually part of the ring or arena system, although it's still Isiya, it's reccommended not to be using characters from other RPs)

forgive me if I'm wrong VVO

Well, I change it up a little and added SOME depth to the character. (Tough by VVO's standards, it's a puddle she can't get her feet wet in.) Also I can't come up with an appropriate serial killer title yet so deal with the currnet one.

Cram wrote:

eheh
sorry! I was tired and cranky. 20 pages of Kumon are to blame
how a bout i just edit it to your specification
Just a few "stupid" questions
What is the LOWEST rank?
Where will the fights be held?
What makes a bred fighter not have parents?
How could Atoki have parents if he 1)killed his foster parents and 2) kills people for sheer fun?
How do people get sent/forced/picked to fight?

There is no lowest rank. Just nothing below 20.

Fights are held in one arena called the Pit, an infamous killing circle. It is a large circular area where people kill each other and monsters are released periodically.

Bred fighters are, well, bred fighters. They are born, then their parents are ruthlessly killed because they are no longer useful. Normal people are NOT captured and sent into the Pit: normal people have parents.

His real parents may be alive, but not in the Pit. Of course, you could just say that they were killed in the Pit.

People are captured by the pit handlers, mindless, indestructible brutes, and then thrown into the Pit.

hey VVO. I want to put my character into a fight but I don't know whether I should wait for you to start it or if I can. I don't want to do somthing I shouldn't be doing

HOW DO I MAKE HIM SEEM TOTALLY INSANE?! The whole "cannibal" angle was the only thing I had in mind.

That was the idea at first...but I though it would count as god-modding so I decided not too. I will change it to that if everyone accepts it.

WooHoo! Akito can now eat live opponents! The limit is a humanoid opponent with rank 185+!

Name: Kaien
Nicknames: N/A(?)
Age: 26 (Yes, he is actually 26)
Race: Vampire
Abilites:
~ Hyper-quick regeneration, reflexes, agility, and strength thanks to an ungodly metabolism. Unfortunately, this metabolism grants him the natural lifespan of a fly, so his diet must incorporate fresh blood in order to keep himself alive. He doesn't need to drink too much, but "not too much" usually means draining another person to the bone.
~ Immunity to light. Unlike certain races of vampire, sunlight does not harm him.

Appearance: He is tall, long, and slender, and also extremely pale. He absolutely doesn't look like his body can host such incredible speed/strength he actually possesses. His power greatly differs from his natural appearance, which gives him the element of surprise against most. Unlike some vampires, he does not glitter.
~ Hair:: Jet-black, unnaturally black.
~ Eyes:: Red: All vampires like him have this frighteningly red shade of color for their eyes.
~ Clothing:: Rags, but they're the most fashionable rags he's been able to procure. He has the tattered remains of a black shirt, which still fits him without revealing (too) much, and some gray pants in actually reasonably good condition.
~ Other:: He has very sharp canine teeth. He was born with them.

History: Kaien was born in extreme poverty in the small vampire community of Holstead. Holstead was a particularly nasty vampire town: they constantly went out to hunt on fresh prey, which usually involved small neighboring human towns. However, in Holstead, Kaien lived a perfectly normal childhood life as a vampire. He was taught to only feed when necessary, but since Kaien always seemed to be hungry, he took little heed to this warning. When he eventually came of age, he was allowed to hunt with the rest of his vampire brethren. He continued this lifestyle for 6 years, until the human community they preyed on retaliated with unprecedented military force. His family and pack was killed, and Kaien was captured, one of the few survivors. Not willing to execute him (it wasn't enough of a punishment), the humans tossed Kaien into the Pit. Unfortunately for them, he's enjoyed it ever since with all of these fresh bodies.
Rank: 42
Role: Fighter, Corpse Cleanup Committee

VVO-The obsessor wrote:

But seriously, what's with people and vampires? D':

I HAD NO OTHER IDEAS, 'KAY? GET IT, GOT IT, GOOD.

did u kill chelli?!?! plz say "NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!" sadface